| | 夏の川
ゆっくり流れ
静かな日
Summer's river flows unhurried -- a quiet day
apparently i got first place in some haiku contest.
random.
i didn't even remember writing this.
i think i just wrote it because i needed a summer haiku.
my spring one was...
タンポポは
ハゲになちゃった
かわいそう
The dandelion is a baldie -- poor thing
i liked that one the best, because of my use of ハゲ [ha•ge], the rude word for bald.
it's kinda hilarious, though....
there's a whole analysis with my poem that i guess the contest people wrote:
First impression: Lazy river.
Season: Summer.
Comments The poem describes a calm summer day --- Summer's river flows unhurried -- a quiet day The diction evokes images of a peaceful time by a small river. Unlike the rushing rivers of winter, a summer river is calm, flowing leisurely. All is still except for the babbling of the river as it streams around and over pebbles on the river bed. Indeed it is the picture of a quiet summer day, peaceful and simple.
isn't that what we have to do for timed writings in AP Lit?
XD;;;
sam's haiku was adorable!! their first impression was YOUNG LOVE. <333
anyway, here's a short update of what's been going on recently:
• i got into JMU (and GMU a while back...), but rejected by W&M and UVA, but i foresaw that so it's cool. i can always transfer later. :]
• spring trip is next week!
• 3rd quarter is ending friday! :O where did the time go!!? this is probably my best 3rd quarter ever....or maybe i'm actually failing all of my classes. who knows? :P
• colorguard is getting crazy, but maybe crazy is good, because i'm currently freaking out about JMU guard auditions at the end of june. golly. it's supposed to be intense. D:
• i hate timed writings.
• The Lonely Island and Sondre Lerche (and yeah Vampire Weekend, too) are awesome and my current loves.
• though things are pretty stressful this month, life is pretty good. |
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